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Living in lines

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Paris
Image size
2652x2652px 4.79 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D700
Shutter Speed
1/1250 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
70 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Aug 25, 2014, 2:03:56 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hello!

The whole image itself is great! You chose black and white, which emphasizes the contrast. Additionally you composed the image in a great way: The three gates in the background are centered, while the person is breaking the symmetry perfectly.
The striped objects create an image of depth. And finally: The floor is wet, and there are reflections on the floor. This creates a great atmosphere.

But there is only one thing I would like to criticize, though. The horizont is not even. Do you see that the right horizontal lines are much higher than the left ones? You could have easily avoided that by choosing crossing lines in your image editing program.

But other from that, I love the picture. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>

Keep it up!